Fortune suddenly smiled upon Jo, and
dropped a good luck penny in her path. Not a
golden penny, exactly, but I doubt if half a million
would have given more real happiness then did the
little sum that came to her in this wise.
Every few weeks she would shut herself
up in her room, put on her scribbling suit, and ‘fall
into a vortex’, as she expressed it, writing
away at her novel with all her heart and soul, for
till that was finished she could find no peace.
Her ‘scribbling suit’ consisted of a
black woolen pinafore on which she could wipe her pen
at will, and a cap of the same material, adorned with
a cheerful red bow, into which she bundled her hair
when the decks were cleared for action. This
cap was a beacon to the inquiring eyes of her family,
who during these periods kept their distance, merely
popping in their heads semi-occasionally to ask, with
interest, “Does genius burn, Jo?” They
did not always venture even to ask this question, but
took an observation of the cap, and judged accordingly.
If this expressive article of dress was drawn low
upon the forehead, it was a sign that hard work was
going on, in exciting moments it was pushed rakishly
askew, and when despair seized the author it was plucked
wholly off, and cast upon the floor. At such
times the intruder silently withdrew, and not until
the red bow was seen gaily erect upon the gifted brow,
did anyone dare address Jo.
She did not think herself a genius
by any means, but when the writing fit came on, she
gave herself up to it with entire abandon, and led
a blissful life, unconscious of want, care, or bad
weather, while she sat safe and happy in an imaginary
world, full of friends almost as real and dear to
her as any in the flesh. Sleep forsook her eyes,
meals stood untasted, day and night were all too short
to enjoy the happiness which blessed her only at such
times, and made these hours worth living, even if
they bore no other fruit. The devine afflatus
usually lasted a week or two, and then she emerged
from her ‘vortex’, hungry, sleepy, cross,
or despondent.
She was just recovering from one of
these attacks when she was prevailed upon to escort
Miss Crocker to a lecture, and in return for her virtue
was rewarded with a new idea. It was a People’s
Course, the lecture on the Pyramids, and Jo rather
wondered at the choice of such a subject for such
an audience, but took it for granted that some great
social evil would be remedied or some great want supplied
by unfolding the glories of the Pharaohs to an audience
whose thoughts were busy with the price of coal and
flour, and whose lives were spent in trying to solve
harder riddles than that of the Sphinx.
They were early, and while Miss Crocker
set the heel of her stocking, Jo amused herself by
examining the faces of the people who occupied the
seat with them. On her left were two matrons,
with massive foreheads and bonnets to match, discussing
Women’s Rights and making tatting. Beyond
sat a pair of humble lovers, artlessly holding each
other by the hand, a somber spinster eating peppermints
out of a paper bag, and an old gentleman taking his
preparatory nap behind a yellow bandanna. On
her right, her only neighbor was a studious looking
lad absorbed in a newspaper.
It was a pictorial sheet, and Jo examined
the work of art nearest her, idly wondering what fortuitous
concatenation of circumstances needed the melodramatic
illustration of an Indian in full war costume, tumbling
over a precipice with a wolf at his throat, while two
infuriated young gentlemen, with unnaturally small
feet and big eyes, were stabbing each other close
by, and a disheveled female was flying away in the
background with her mouth wide open. Pausing
to turn a page, the lad saw her looking and, with
boyish good nature offered half his paper, saying
bluntly, “want to read it? That’s
a first-rate story.”
Jo accepted it with a smile, for she
had never outgrown her liking for lads, and soon found
herself involved in the usual labyrinth of love, mystery,
and murder, for the story belonged to that class of
light literature in which the passions have a holiday,
and when the author’s invention fails, a grand
catastrophe clears the stage of one half the dramatis
personae, leaving the other half to exult over their
downfall.
“Prime, isn’t it?”
asked the boy, as her eye went down the last paragraph
of her portion.
“I think you and I could do
as well as that if we tried,” returned Jo, amused
at his admiration of the trash.
“I should think I was a pretty
lucky chap if I could. She makes a good living
out of such stories, they say.” and he pointed
to the name of Mrs. S.L.A.N.G. Northbury, under
the title of the tale.
“Do you know her?” asked Jo, with sudden
interest.
“No, but I read all her pieces,
and I know a fellow who works in the office where
this paper is printed.”
“Do you say she makes a good
living out of stories like this?” and Jo looked
more respectfully at the agitated group and thickly
sprinkled exclamation points that adorned the page.
“Guess she does! She knows
just what folks like, and gets paid well for writing
it.”
Here the lecture began, but Jo heard
very little of it, for while Professor Sands was prosing
away about Belzoni, Cheops, scarabei, and hieroglyphics,
she was covertly taking down the address of the paper,
and boldly resolving to try for the hundred-dollar
prize offered in its columns for a sensational story.
By the time the lecture ended and the audience awoke,
she had built up a splendid fortune for herself (not
the first founded on paper), and was already deep in
the concoction of her story, being unable to decide
whether the duel should come before the elopement
or after the murder.
She said nothing of her plan at home,
but fell to work next day, much to the disquiet of
her mother, who always looked a little anxious when
‘genius took to burning’. Jo had
never tried this style before, contenting herself
with very mild romances for The Spread Eagle.
Her experience and miscellaneous reading were of
service now, for they gave her some idea of dramatic
effect, and supplied plot, language, and costumes.
Her story was as full of desperation and despair as
her limited acquaintance with those uncomfortable
emotions enabled her to make it, and having located
it in Lisbon, she wound up with an earthquake, as
a striking and appropriate denouement. The manuscript
was privately dispatched, accompanied by a note, modestly
saying that if the tale didn’t get the prize,
which the writer hardly dared expect, she would be
very glad to receive any sum it might be considered
worth.
Six weeks is a long time to wait,
and a still longer time for a girl to keep a secret,
but Jo did both, and was just beginning to give up
all hope of ever seeing her manuscript again, when
a letter arrived which almost took her breath away,
for on opening it, a check for a hundred dollars fell
into her lap. For a minute she stared at it as
if it had been a snake, then she read her letter and
began to cry. If the amiable gentleman who wrote
that kindly note could have known what intense happiness
he was giving a fellow creature, I think he would
devote his leisure hours, if he has any, to that amusement,
for Jo valued the letter more than the money, because
it was encouraging, and after years of effort it was
so pleasant to find that she had learned to do something,
though it was only to write a sensation story.
A prouder young woman was seldom seen
than she, when, having composed herself, she electrified
the family by appearing before them with the letter
in one hand, the check in the other, announcing that
she had won the prize. Of course there was a
great jubilee, and when the story came everyone read
and praised it, though after her father had told her
that the language was good, the romance fresh and hearty,
and the tragedy quite thrilling, he shook his head,
and said in his unworldly way...
“You can do better than this,
Jo. Aim at the highest, and never mind the money.”
“I think the money is the best
part of it. What will you do with such a fortune?”
asked Amy, regarding the magic slip of paper with a
reverential eye.
“Send Beth and Mother to the
seaside for a month or two,” answered Jo promptly.
To the seaside they went, after much
discussion, and though Beth didn’t come home
as plump and rosy as could be desired, she was much
better, while Mrs. March declared she felt ten years
younger. So Jo was satisfied with the investment
of her prize money, and fell to work with a cheery
spirit, bent on earning more of those delightful checks.
She did earn several that year, and began to feel
herself a power in the house, for by the magic of
a pen, her ‘rubbish’ turned into comforts
for them all. The Duke’s Daughter paid
the butcher’s bill, A Phantom Hand put down
a new carpet, and the Curse of the Coventrys proved
the blessing of the Marches in the way of groceries
and gowns.
Wealth is certainly a most desirable
thing, but poverty has its sunny side, and one of
the sweet uses of adversity is the genuine satisfaction
which comes from hearty work of head or hand, and to
the inspiration of necessity, we owe half the wise,
beautiful, and useful blessings of the world.
Jo enjoyed a taste of this satisfaction, and ceased
to envy richer girls, taking great comfort in the knowledge
that she could supply her own wants, and need ask
no one for a penny.
Little notice was taken of her stories,
but they found a market, and encouraged by this fact,
she resolved to make a bold stroke for fame and fortune.
Having copied her novel for the fourth time, read
it to all her confidential friends, and submitted
it with fear and trembling to three publishers, she
at last disposed of it, on condition that she would
cut it down one third, and omit all the parts which
she particularly admired.
“Now I must either bundle it
back in to my tin kitchen to mold, pay for printing
it myself, or chop it up to suit purchasers and get
what I can for it. Fame is a very good thing
to have in the house, but cash is more convenient,
so I wish to take the sense of the meeting on this
important subject,” said Jo, calling a family
council.
“Don’t spoil your book,
my girl, for there is more in it than you know, and
the idea is well worked out. Let it wait and
ripen,” was her father’s advice, and he
practiced what he preached, having waited patiently
thirty years for fruit of his own to ripen, and being
in no haste to gather it even now when it was sweet
and mellow.
“It seems to me that Jo will
profit more by taking the trial than by waiting,”
said Mrs. March. “Criticism is the best
test of such work, for it will show her both unsuspected
merits and faults, and help her to do better next
time. We are too partial, but the praise and
blame of outsiders will prove useful, even if she
gets but little money.”
“Yes,” said Jo, knitting
her brows, “that’s just it. I’ve
been fussing over the thing so long, I really don’t
know whether it’s good, bad, or indifferent.
It will be a great help to have cool, impartial persons
take a look at it, and tell me what they think of it.”
“I wouldn’t leave a word
out of it. You’ll spoil it if you do, for
the interest of the story is more in the minds than
in the actions of the people, and it will be all a
muddle if you don’t explain as you go on,”
said Meg, who firmly believed that this book was the
most remarkable novel ever written.
“But Mr. Allen says, ’Leave
out the explanations, make it brief and dramatic,
and let the characters tell the story’,”
interrupted Jo, turning to the publisher’s note.
“Do as he tells you. He
knows what will sell, and we don’t. Make
a good, popular book, and get as much money as you
can. By-and-by, when you’ve got a name,
you can afford to digress, and have philosophical
and metaphysical people in your novels,” said
Amy, who took a strictly practical view of the subject.
“Well,” said Jo, laughing,
“if my people are ’philosophical and metaphysical’,
it isn’t my fault, for I know nothing about such
things, except what I hear father say, sometimes.
If I’ve got some of his wise ideas jumbled
up with my romance, so much the better for me.
Now, Beth, what do you say?”
“I should so like to see it
printed soon,” was all Beth said, and smiled
in saying it. But there was an unconscious emphasis
on the last word, and a wistful look in the eyes that
never lost their childlike candor, which chilled Jo’s
heart for a minute with a forboding fear, and decided
her to make her little venture ‘soon’.
So, with Spartan firmness, the young
authoress laid her first-born on her table, and chopped
it up as ruthlessly as any ogre. In the hope
of pleasing everyone, she took everyone’s advice,
and like the old man and his donkey in the fable suited
nobody.
Her father liked the metaphysical
streak which had unconsciously got into it, so that
was allowed to remain though she had her doubts about
it. Her mother thought that there was a trifle
too much description. Out, therefore it came,
and with it many necessary links in the story.
Meg admired the tragedy, so Jo piled up the agony to
suit her, while Amy objected to the fun, and, with
the best intentions in life, Jo quenched the spritly
scenes which relieved the somber character of the
story. Then, to complicate the ruin, she cut
it down one third, and confidingly sent the poor little
romance, like a picked robin, out into the big, busy
world to try its fate.
Well, it was printed, and she got
three hundred dollars for it, likewise plenty of praise
and blame, both so much greater than she expected
that she was thrown into a state of bewilderment from
which it took her some time to recover.
“You said, Mother, that criticism
would help me. But how can it, when it’s
so contradictory that I don’t know whether I’ve
written a promising book or broken all the ten commandments?”
cried poor Jo, turning over a heap of notices, the
perusal of which filled her with pride and joy one
minute, wrath and dismay the next. “This
man says, ‘An exquisite book, full of truth,
beauty, and earnestness.’ ’All is
sweet, pure, and healthy.’” continued the
perplexed authoress. “The next, ’The
theory of the book is bad, full of morbid fancies,
spiritualistic ideas, and unnatural characters.’
Now, as I had no theory of any kind, don’t believe
in Spiritualism, and copied my characters from life,
I don’t see how this critic can be right.
Another says, ’It’s one of the best American
novels which has appeared for years.’ (I know
better than that), and the next asserts that ’Though
it is original, and written with great force and feeling,
it is a dangerous book.’ ’Tisn’t!
Some make fun of it, some overpraise, and nearly
all insist that I had a deep theory to expound, when
I only wrote it for the pleasure and the money.
I wish I’d printed the whole or not at all,
for I do hate to be so misjudged.”
Her family and friends administered
comfort and commendation liberally. Yet it was
a hard time for sensitive, high-spirited Jo, who meant
so well and had apparently done so ill. But
it did her good, for those whose opinion had real
value gave her the criticism which is an author’s
best education, and when the first soreness was over,
she could laugh at her poor little book, yet believe
in it still, and feel herself the wiser and stronger
for the buffeting she had received.
“Not being a genius, like Keats,
it won’t kill me,” she said stoutly, “and
I’ve got the joke on my side, after all, for
the parts that were taken straight out of real life
are denounced as impossible and absurd, and the scenes
that I made up out of my own silly head are pronounced
‘charmingly natural, tender, and true’.
So I’ll comfort myself with that, and when
I’m ready, I’ll up again and take another.”