Louise did not come down till she
heard Godolphin walking away on the plank. She
said to herself that she had shipwrecked her husband
once by putting in her oar, and she was not going
to do it again. When the actor’s footfalls
died out in the distance she descended to the parlor,
where she found Maxwell over his manuscript at the
table.
She had to call to him, “Well?”
before he seemed aware of her presence.
Even then he did not look round, but
he said, “Godolphin wants to play Atland.”
“The lover?”
“Yes. He thinks he sees his part in it.”
“And do you?”
“How do I know?”
“Well, I am glad I let him get
safely away before I came back, for I certainly couldn’t
have held in when he proposed that, if I had been
here. I don’t understand you, Brice!
Why do you have anything more to do with him?
Why do you let him touch the new play? Was he
ever of the least use with the old one?”
Maxwell lay back in his chair with
a laugh. “Not the least in the world.”
The realization of the fact amused him more and more.
“I was just thinking how everything he ever
got me to do to it,” he looked down at the manuscript,
“was false and wrong. They talk about a
knowledge of the stage as if the stage were a difficult
science, instead of a very simple piece of mechanism
whose limitations and possibilities any one can seize
at a glance. All that their knowledge of it comes
to is clap-trap, pure and simple. They brag of
its resources, and tell you the carpenter can do anything
you want nowadays, but if you attempt anything outside
of their tradition they are frightened. They think
that their exits and their entrances are great matters,
and that they must come on with such a speech, and
go off with such another; but it is not of the least
consequence how they come or go if they have something
interesting to say or do.”
“Why don’t you say these things to Godolphin?”
“I do, and worse. He admits
their truth with a candor and an intelligence that
are dismaying. He has a perfect conception of
Atland’s part, and he probably will play it in
a way to set your teeth on edge.”
“Why do you let him? Why
don’t you keep your play and offer it to a manager
or some actor who will know how to do it?” demanded
Louise, with sorrowful submission.
“Godolphin will know how to
do it, even if he isn’t able to. And, besides,
I should be a fool to fling him away for any sort of
promising uncertainty.”
“He was willing to fling you away!”
“Yes, but I’m not so important
to him as he is to me. He’s the best I
can do for the present. It’s a compromise
all the way through — a cursed spite from
beginning to end. Your own words don’t represent
your ideas, and the more conscience you put into the
work the further you get from what you thought it
would be. Then comes the actor with the infernal
chemistry of his personality. He imagines the
thing perfectly, not as you imagined it, but as you
wrote it, and then he is no more able to play it as
he imagined it than you were to write it as you imagined
it. What the public finally gets is something
three times removed from the truth that was first
in the dramatist’s mind. But I’m very
lucky to have Godolphin back again.”
“I hope you’re not going
to let him see that you think so.”
“Oh, no! I’m going
to keep him in a suppliant attitude throughout, and
I’m going to let you come in and tame his spirit,
if he — kicks.”
“Don’t be vulgar, Brice,”
said Louise, and she laughed rather forlornly.
“I don’t see how you have the heart to
joke, if you think it’s so bad as you say.”
“I haven’t. I’m
joking without any heart.” He stood up.
“Let us go and take a bath.”
She glanced at him with a swift inventory
of his fagged looks, and said, “Indeed, you
shall not take a bath this morning. You couldn’t
react against it. You won’t, will you?”
“No, I’ll only lie on
the sand, if you can pick me out a good warm spot,
and watch you.”
“I shall not bathe, either.”
“Well, then, I’ll watch
the other women.” He put out his hand and
took hers.
She felt his touch very cold.
“You are excited I can see. I wish — ”
“What? That I was not an intending dramatist?”
“That you didn’t have
such excitements in your life. They will kill
you.”
“They are all that will keep me alive.”
They went down to the beach, and walked
back and forth on its curve several times before they
dropped in the sand at a discreet distance from several
groups of hotel acquaintance. People were coming
and going from the line of bath-houses that backed
upon the low sand-bank behind them, with its tufts
of coarse silvery-green grasses. The Maxwells
bowed to some of the ladies who tripped gayly past
them in their airy costumes to the surf, or came up
from it sobered and shivering. Four or five young
fellows, with sun-blackened arms and legs, were passing
ball near them. A pony-carriage drove by on the
wet sand; a horseman on a crop-tailed roan thumped
after it at a hard trot. Dogs ran barking vaguely
about, and children with wooden shovels screamed at
their play. Far off shimmered the sea, of one
pale blue with the sky. The rooks were black
at either end of the beach; a line of sail-boats and
dories swung across its crescent beyond the bathers,
who bobbed up and down in the surf, or showed a head
here and there outside of it.
“What a singular spectacle,”
said Maxwell. “The casting off of the conventional
in sea-bathing always seems to me like the effect of
those dreams where we appear in society insufficiently
dressed, and wonder whether we can make it go.”
“Yes, isn’t it?”
His wife tried to cover all the propositions with one
loosely fitting assent.
“I’m surprised,”
Maxwell went on, “that some realistic wretch
hasn’t put this sort of thing on the stage.
It would be tremendously effective; if he made it
realistic enough it would be attacked by the press
as improper and would fill the house. Couldn’t
we work a sea-bathing scene into the ‘Second
Chapter’? It would make the fortune of the
play, and it would give Godolphin a chance to show
his noble frame in something like the majesty of nature.
Godolphin would like nothing better. We could
have Atland rescue Salome, and Godolphin could flop
round among the canvas breakers for ten minutes, and
come on for a recall with the heroine, both dripping
real water all over the stage.”
“Don’t be disgusting,
Brice,” said his wife, absently. She had
her head half turned from him, watching a lady who
had just come out of her bath-house and was passing
very near them on her way to the water. Maxwell
felt the inattention in his wife’s tone and looked
up.
The bather returned their joint gaze
steadily from eyes that seemed, as Maxwell said, to
smoulder under their long lashes, and to question her
effect upon them in a way that he was some time finding
a phrase for. He was tormented to make out whether
she were a large person or not; without her draperies
he could not tell. But she moved with splendid
freedom, and her beauty expressed a maturity of experience
beyond her years; she looked young, and yet she looked
as if she had been taking care of herself a good while.
She was certainly very handsome, Louise owned to herself,
as the lady quickened her pace, and finally ran down
to the water and plunged into a breaker that rolled
in at the right moment in uncommon volume.
“Well?” she asked her
husband, whose eyes had gone with hers.
“We ought to have clapped.”
“Do you think she is an actress?”
“I don’t know. I
never saw her before. She seemed to turn the sunshine
into lime-light as she passed. Why! that’s
rather pretty, isn’t it? And it’s
a verse. I wonder what it is about these people.
The best of them have nothing of the stage in them — at
least, the men haven’t. I’m not sure,
though, that the women haven’t. There are
lots of women off the stage who are actresses, but
they don’t seem so. They’re personal;
this one was impersonal. She didn’t seem
to regard me as a man; she regarded me as a house.
Did you feel that?”
“Yes, that was it, I suppose.
But she regarded you more than she did me, I think.”
“Why, of course. You were only a matinee.”
They sat half an hour longer in the
sand, and then he complained that the wind blew all
the warmth out of him as fast as the sun shone it into
him. She felt his hand next her and found it still
cold; after a glance round she furtively felt his
forehead.
“You’re still thinking,”
she sighed. “Come! We must go back.”
“Yes. That girl won’t
be out of the water for half an hour yet; and we couldn’t
wait to see her clothed and in her right mind afterwards.”
“What makes you think she’s
a girl?” asked his wife, as they moved slowly
off.
He did not seem to have heard her
question. He said, “I don’t believe
I can make the new play go, Louise; I haven’t
the strength for it. There’s too much good
stuff in Haxard; I can’t throw away what I’ve
done on it.”
“That is just what I was thinking,
Brice! It would be too bad to lose that.
The love-business as you’ve remodeled it is all
very well. But it is light; it’s
comedy; and Haxard is such splendid tragedy. I
want you to make your first impression in that.
You can do comedy afterwards; but if you did comedy
first, the public would never think your tragedy was
serious.”
“Yes, there’s a law in
that. A clown mustn’t prophesy. If
a prophet chooses to joke, now and then, all well
and good. I couldn’t begin now and expand
that love-business into a whole play. It must
remain an episode, and Godolphin must take it or leave
it. Of course he’ll want Atland emaciated
to fatten Haxard, as he calls it. But Atland doesn’t
amount to much, as it is, and I don’t believe
I could make him; it’s essentially a passive
part; Salome must make the chief effect in that business,
and I think I’ll have her a little more serious,
too. It’ll be more in keeping with the
rest.”
“I don’t see why she shouldn’t
be serious. There’s nothing ignoble in
what she does.”
“No. It can be very impassioned.”
Louise thought of the smouldering
eyes of that woman, and she wondered if they were
what suggested something very impassioned to Maxwell;
but with all the frankness between them, she did not
ask him.
On their way to the cottage they saw
one of the hotel bell-boys coming out. “Just
left a telegram in there for you,” he called,
as he came towards them.
Louise began, “Oh, dear, I hope
there’s nothing the matter with papa! Or
your mother.”
She ran forward, and Maxwell followed
at his usual pace, so that she had time to go inside
and come out with the despatch before he mounted the
veranda steps.
“You open it!” she entreated,
piteously, holding it towards him.
He pulled it impatiently open, and
glanced at the signature. “It’s from
Godolphin;” and he read, “Don’t destroy
old play. Keep new love-business for episode.
Will come over this afternoon.” Maxwell
smiled. “More mind transference.”
Louise laughed in hysterical relief.
“Now you can make him do just what you want.”